This short story was created visually, no script was written whatsoever. That's why some scenes are hard to understand. It was supposed to be a action sequence, but because of it's low number of panels it became too slow. And all the motion and power was in the hands of the artist, me. And, to help the confusion, the story is about a Plane that fights a Mountain-man and get saved by a kid that gets transformed into a huge Black bird, while some ordinary people watch all the action... Got it?
Some of the pages changed in the final version. As you can see below the thumbs, there is a study for the third panel of the first page and some studies for the giant's opening scene.
As this was previously posted in the FLIGHT FORUM, we received a lot of suggestions (that we followed). I even had the request for words, but it never worked well.
Next week I'll post the first pages.
